Oct 19 2007
New and Improved MissionMaker Game Story!
The Persian Empire, the greatest empire there ever was, or is it? The mighty King Cyrus is on an epic quest to save his country from the invading Alexander the Great and his merciless army. Before, the mighty King Cyrus had gone to the countries in the Persian Empire to tell them about a terrible previous war. On the way, he lost some very special items that could be very dangerous in the wrong hands. If these special and dangerous items are not found then the invading Alexander the Great will take over the Persian Empire forever! If these special items are found then Alexander the Great will be banished from Persia! Then you have finished my game and won!

Hey Natnat, Interesting post!! Very creative! I can’t wait to play your game. What are the dangerous items that he lost???

Hi natnat! It’s Naveen. It sure has been a long time! Oh and don’t worry about that commenting thing. It was my fault.
So how are you? I tell you what the the website for my class Tv is, as soon as I find out, it will be on my blog too. Have to go now sorry

Bye
Naveen
Well done Natalie - your game story sounds great. You have used some very descriptive language to tell us about the hero and villains.
I can’t wait to play your game now